My first attempt at poetry
Dreams
Dreams of blood,
Dreams of pain,
They fill my sleep each night.
Dreams of fear,
Dreams of death,
They haunt me in no-light.
Dreams of anger,
Dreams of hate,
Why wont the disappear?
Dreams of me,
Dreams so true,
I see them through my mirror
Okay, so as the title would suggest, this was my first attempt. I wrote it at like 4.30am after havin a nightmare.
Okay, so as the title would suggest, this was my first attempt. I wrote it at like 4.30am after havin a nightmare.
posted by Katie @ Monday, November 07, 2005
5 Comments:
That's a good first attempt!
not that it's good that you are having nightmares, but it's good that you are able to express yourself this way!
PS it was good that you were able to come over the other day, it was good to talk to you face to face for once!
hey princess.
good to see you getting the feeling onto paper! did it help?
yes the poem was dark but if it helped it seved a purpose
yeah it did help
no bad for a first time... I like it!
it's a great poem, and it's such a relief to express yourself, ay!
I find that when I write dark poems it at least helps me focus more on writing a good poem about the darkness and less on being overwhelmed by the lack of light!!
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